It's times like this that I wish I was better at improv...

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Well, it's hard to not say I'm kinda disappointed with how reception of "Reaching the Absolute" turned out. Looking back on it, I can't help but be a little negative of it myself. The horror bit of it seemed too short, and the whole story seems like a big case of shock value more than actual horror. [facepalm] Should've read it over a little bit more before I sent it off.

But what do you folks think? What could've I done differently to improve this story?